Target audience feedback - You need to do some research to back up any points you make. Go the the BFI statistical yearbook and research the genre and which audiences prefer it. this is only at a level 1 at the moment.
Genre research feedback - You have gone into a lot of detail about the conventions of the genre. You have also thought about the sub-genres etc. I would like to see a look at the history of the genre incorporated. At the moment this is a level 2. The changes above would take it into a level 3.
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