Feedback - Miss Spencer

You have made a start to your analysis Ashley, and have made some good points throughout your analysis. You have thought about conventions, comparing horror to rom com, but I would like some more specific examples with screen shots to illustrate this. At the moment you are in a level 2, but in order to improve you need to:

• Think about the DISTINCT formula we discussed in the horror conventions lesson and apply this to all of your analysis.
• Embed the film opening at the top of each analysis
• upload screen shots of relevant shots throughout your work
• Blogger doesn't automatically spell check your work, but it does have a spell check icon. Can you ensure you check all of your work as this is taken into account when assessing your work.
• You should have four pieces of analysis by now, I am running a catch up day in half term so will invite you to this to support you catching up after starting the course late.