First Cut

After weeks of editing, we have our first cut of the opening, we have been given feedback from our teacher, who has said that we need to add our titles and logo, which we are going to do as they have been created we just have to add them into our film. We have also been told that we need to make the scary face flashback slightly longer and perhaps add an effect which we are going to look into downloading, we also need to make this scenes much more exaggerated to really nail the horror feel. We are going to cut down the duration of the entire film and work on some blurry shots by changing settings to make the shots look sharper and more focused.
We did get some positive feedback, that our POV shots was good and the ending is a good horror ending, we just need to remove one particular pan from the end. We also need to add a 'cinematic feel' to our film by using Cineon Converter as well as adding a Vignette effect to the flashback scenes to make them darker and edgier.
This is our first cut of the film -